Thesis statement:downloading MP3 and videos without paying any money isnt legal and can not be on no account.
Reason 1:ıt is the same thing with theft.because you can easily download without any money although you dont have any permission.
Reason 2:people are commiting an offence with legal way and freely.
reason 3:Because you are impeding the others from gaining and making profit in their work.you are attacting their right.
opponent's idea:some may think that it must be legal since now it is very common and uncontrollable.also they say that costs are very high they cant afford them without it.
refutation of the opponent's idea:ı think it is not late for doing something.maybe it is vey commom and we wont stop this offence entirely.but we can decrease with making some precautions.
28 Aralık 2009 Pazartesi
27 Aralık 2009 Pazar
THE ENVIRONMENT IN CHILDHOOD
Many people believe that city is more appropriate for child’s growing in supporting facilities in some ways.but in my opinion,countryside is more adventagous , since there are some reasons such as having free and unstressful environment,natural resources for her/his growing more healtily and becoming reliable for security.
Firstly,especially in recent times,children can gain bad habits easily in city because for example reaching and selling drugs become easier .in there,families may have some difficulties in controllin their children since they have started to be sold everywhere even in schools.but in countrysine child can be far away from these dangers.
Second reason is about child’s growing healtily.health is one of the most important point in child’s growing period.in countrside most of the foods in his diet can be provided by natural ways.instead of artifical foods which can affect his further health negatively,natural foods fasten child’s development and strength his immune system.
The last but foremost reason is about free and unstressfullenvironment of countryside .childhood period is the most important part of our life.not only physical but also phsicological factors affect this period greatly.in this period he needs a free environment order to discover new things.in complexity of city life child gets stressed.but incountryside he can observe everyting freely.
Many people believe that city is more appropriate for child’s growing in supporting facilities in some ways.but in my opinion,countryside is more adventagous , since there are some reasons such as having free and unstressful environment,natural resources for her/his growing more healtily and becoming reliable for security.
Firstly,especially in recent times,children can gain bad habits easily in city because for example reaching and selling drugs become easier .in there,families may have some difficulties in controllin their children since they have started to be sold everywhere even in schools.but in countrysine child can be far away from these dangers.
Second reason is about child’s growing healtily.health is one of the most important point in child’s growing period.in countrside most of the foods in his diet can be provided by natural ways.instead of artifical foods which can affect his further health negatively,natural foods fasten child’s development and strength his immune system.
The last but foremost reason is about free and unstressfullenvironment of countryside .childhood period is the most important part of our life.not only physical but also phsicological factors affect this period greatly.in this period he needs a free environment order to discover new things.in complexity of city life child gets stressed.but incountryside he can observe everyting freely.
14 Aralık 2009 Pazartesi
OUTLİNE
—Thesis Statement: countrside is more appropirate for a child's growing up in terms of being not only more free but also reliable environment for families and having facilities for a child's growing up more healtily with natural source
—Reason for 1free and unstressful enironment
-Example1: children need to play in freely
—Reason for 2:more reliable for their security
—Example 2: children can be far away from reaching bad habits in countyside
—Reason for 3:growing up more healtily
—Example 3: foods are made natural ways have a big impact on their developing heatily
—Reasons against (opponent’s argument) ____________________________
—Refutation of opponent’s argument: __________________________________
—Thesis Statement: countrside is more appropirate for a child's growing up in terms of being not only more free but also reliable environment for families and having facilities for a child's growing up more healtily with natural source
—Reason for 1free and unstressful enironment
-Example1: children need to play in freely
—Reason for 2:more reliable for their security
—Example 2: children can be far away from reaching bad habits in countyside
—Reason for 3:growing up more healtily
—Example 3: foods are made natural ways have a big impact on their developing heatily
—Reasons against (opponent’s argument) ____________________________
—Refutation of opponent’s argument: __________________________________
traditional or online
we have discussed on teaching in traditional and online class.we have some conclusion.fistly both of them have some adventages and disadventages.for example,online class is more adventagous in terms of benefitting from developing technology.in there,working and studying or doing homework may be faster than the traditional one.likewise in our recent class,you can send your homework to your teacher from your home.if you have enough possibilty,you can reach lecture notes easily.on the other hand,if you lack of these possibilities or your computer and program doesnt work ,you wont get ahead with your class.also despite its technological easiness,in online class teacher isnt as active as in traditional class.in traditional class your cominication with not only teacher but also your classmate is much more.for when you want to learn something or ask a question to your teacher,you will ask him face to face
we have discussed on teaching in traditional and online class.we have some conclusion.fistly both of them have some adventages and disadventages.for example,online class is more adventagous in terms of benefitting from developing technology.in there,working and studying or doing homework may be faster than the traditional one.likewise in our recent class,you can send your homework to your teacher from your home.if you have enough possibilty,you can reach lecture notes easily.on the other hand,if you lack of these possibilities or your computer and program doesnt work ,you wont get ahead with your class.also despite its technological easiness,in online class teacher isnt as active as in traditional class.in traditional class your cominication with not only teacher but also your classmate is much more.for when you want to learn something or ask a question to your teacher,you will ask him face to face
7 Aralık 2009 Pazartesi
we have gone two places which have some similarities and differences.first place is a mall in which there are different sections for shopping.it was a closed area.but second place is a small island but it is larger than the first one.in there,there are lots of beautiful threes and coasts.for each different activity,there is a specially seperated place and you have many more choosing alternatives for doing something and visiting in there.for this reasons,I think the second place is more appropirate for you because it can meet your needs more easily for having a lot of alternatives.
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